-【TOEFL】一个26万观看次数的托福独立写作视频，评论纷纷表示学习后得到了28分及以上

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• CINDYANG新地:真的有用啊，看完第二天考试写了470个字就27了
• 生亦死死亦生z:／ ￣￣ ＼　 |　ー　ー \　 ／￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣＼ |　 ◉　◉ |　/ \ \　　 ▱　/ ∠ 托福都考完了吗 / ＼　　 イ　 \ 没有考完还在逛B站 / ／　　　＼　 \_____________________/ /　|　　　 \ \　 |　|　　　 | | | | | |
• 篾兰:写作文的方式学到了(=・ω・=) 不顺序写，而是写outline然后在各个扩展。不过用第一第二人称没问题么... 学校老师完全不让用
• Marissa-G:我来还愿、8/24考的、写作26分之前考只有16分
• 戈好雨:第一段 Becoming an adult is a really special time in anybody’s life and the call to head out into the world and embrace our independence is, for many people, quite powerful. I think this can depend on a lot of different factors; for example, somebody starting a job might have different needs and priorities compared to a person who intends to go on and study at university. Generally speaking, I believe that it is better for all concerned if young adults continue to live with their families for a longer time, particularly if they are going to be studying at university.